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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:27 pm

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I still have no idea how to do that. Huh..

See the little button between the Underlined U and the Page With the blue arrows in the quick reply box area thing? Pull down or paste the other person's post or part of the post you want to quote, highlight it, and then it'll put "{quote} & {/quote}" around them and it'll work! Of course it'll use []'s instead, but that's not the point. OR you could place quote and /quote with brackets around the part you want in your post and it'll work.

Hopefully, that makes sense, lol.

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:31 pm

Errrr.. not really. I don't think that's shown here.

Here's the story. Bah.. I know... it ain't good.


I wasn’t tagged, but I really wanted to do this – it looked like fun! :]. I saw ColorsOfTheSky101 write one, and it inspired me to try. So here we go!

Summery - Little Seddie one-shots based on songs.

Disclaimer – I don’t own iCarly.


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Her Diamonds” –


(Freddie’s P.O.V.)

Everyone gathered on the rainy Saturday, all dressed in the proper formal wear for the occasion. Carly was there of course, with Spencer. Even Ms. Briggs showed up.

I watched as my friend (secretly my long crush, but she doesn’t know. And she won’t anytime soon) knelt down in front of the stone saying her prayers; the usual customs used to close the day. Her curly blonde hair cascaded down, blocking her face and the tears that were probably falling from her face right about now.

It made me wretch.

Well, not in the way you think.

I’ve never seen Sam cry. Never. And it wasn’t pleasant, I’ll tell you that. It tour me to pieces, and it still was.

I had to admit it: I really like Sam. I still wonder how I grew out of my “love” for Carly and fell for Sam. I mean, she picks on me, calls me names, and hurts me (physically may I add). But somehow, she broke down all my walls and made her way strait to my heart.

She’s stuck there, and somewhere inside me, I don’t want her to ever leave.

Sam rose from her kneeling position and walked back to the crowd of people huddled together as the coffin began dropping down into the ground.

I wasn’t sure exactly what to do, and I didn’t know quite what to say. Maybe my actions just took over as I walked over to where Sam stood, observing the chest bury into the ground.

My arm was soon wrapped around the girl, pulling her into a side-hug. She looked up at me, red-eyed and devastated.

It broke my heart just looking at her, and I could feel it slowly collapse down my chest.

Sam started sobbing again, looking down at the drenched grass. Her tears were like diamonds, crashing to her feet. I didn’t know what to do at first, but I pulled her in closer to me and cried too.

We both left the scene together, and decided it was better to not read the tombstone in front of the burial. Maybe when we got over her death, but not now.


Mary Susan Puckett
June 1972 – September 2009
R.I.P.


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Things I’ll Never Say” –


(Sam’s P.O.V.)

I had a habit of falling in love quickly. I was just too good at hiding it.

Yep. It’s true: I’m in love with a complete dork.

Didn’t see it coming? I didn’t either, actually. Huh.

Sure, I insult the dweeb anytime I get the chance to (about everyday), but hey, wouldn’t you? He’s a total tech-geek, which sucks. What’s worse is that he has a crush on my best friend Carly, and dreams of her liking him back.

News flash Freddo: It ain’t happening. Ever. Get over it.

So I’m stuck here, living day by day in the attempt to get this dork to get the picture. But frankly, it’s a waste of time. He doesn’t care; he hates me for Pete’s sake! Can you blame him though?

Anyway, if you’re hoping he’ll figure this out any time soon, quit dreaming bucko.

These are things I’ll never say.
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:38 pm

It's shown, because I can see it! Lol. It's the fourth button down. Click it and see what happens. It's the one right next to the U. Maybe you're looking in the wrong place. Just above the box you type in here and just below where it says "Stop watching this topic" is where the options are.

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I liked the first one, very good descriptions and emotional. Good ending! Not bad at all.

The second one, hm...I like it, but there's something about it I just can't put my finger on. It's good, but something about it irks me, but I just don't know what.

But I wouldn't doubt that others will like it, great work!

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:41 pm

Ohhh... yeah I see it. LOL. Oops.

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Thank you.

Thanks I guess? Seriously, if there's anything wrong with it, feel free to speak up!

Thank you! :]
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:44 pm

You're welcome, for all the thank yous!

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Thanks I guess? Seriously, if there's anything wrong with it, feel free to speak up!

Well, like I said, I honestly don't know what it is that bugs me with it. I'd tell you if there was something, but I can't put my finger on it. 100% truth. It's an odd thing that happens to me from time to time. Maybe that's why I don't beta that often, lol!

If it ever comes to me, I will definitely tell you.

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:46 pm

Thanks? Ahehe. All in all, do you think it's okay?
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:49 pm

Yup! I do, all in all, they're okay.

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Sun Aug 23, 2009 9:01 pm

Thanks :]
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Sun Aug 23, 2009 9:05 pm

You're welcome! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:00 am

Hehe. Haven't even touched the story since we last spoke. Huh.
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:05 am

Well, it's only been...3 hours, I think. You'll get stuff done with it eventually. I haven't touched iSub either, so you're not alone. I planned to, but I...watched tv and ate instead, lol.

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:12 am

LOL, I read stories. Yeahhh...
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:17 am

Whatever floats your boat!

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:27 pm

I guess so!
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Mon Aug 24, 2009 5:19 pm

So I'm no longer revamping iSub...I'm revamping that one and two other stories now...lol. Here I go again overworking myself, haha.

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Mon Aug 24, 2009 9:37 pm

LOL. I'm working on the iCarly song-fic one and the Thaddeas and Thor story. Right now though? I'm drawing Isabella (non-cartoon style) in a school uniform 'cos I was bored. Yup..
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Mon Aug 24, 2009 9:48 pm

Non-cartoon style meaning...? Anime? Real life sort of thing?

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:12 am

Anime I guess. I don't call it that though. I just call it drawing.

I gave up on it though. Went back to the iCarly story. I got another song up, so that's good..
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:13 am

Another song? What song is it this time?

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:23 am

Well yeah. The stories like mini song-fics in one story. Haven't you seen those?

Miss Independent by Neyo. My next one will be Invisible by Taylor Swift. My friend suggested it, and the lyrics are really nice. Then I'll be working with the songs you suggested. I'll be writing, like, ten of these mini song-fics.
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:25 am

Mini-song fics, no. I've read song-fics, sure, but not like what you've showed me. What I read for you was the first time I've read something like that.

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:28 am

Ohh. I've seen a couple of 'em actually. It was a tagging kind of thing, but since I wasn't tagged but thought it was fun, I decided to try! Heck, you could do it for any catagory! Phineas and Ferb even!
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:34 am

I'll have to look into it, I guess. Sounds very interesting.

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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:37 am

I guess. I was thinking about doing it for Phineas and Ferb, but I'm not sure. I'll think about it (it's more towards the NO catogory though..)
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PostSubject: Re: Fanfiction   Tue Aug 25, 2009 12:38 am

With what I saw from what you did with the iCarly stuff, you could do it, probably. Smile

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